This is my story so far, one that I plan to make a manga out of... Please tell me your true opinion about this..

Karen Konoe's brother had died when she was 12, and he was 16. He was murdered in a boys school. And so she decided that when she was 16, she would go and avenge his death. So she ran away from her home, raised money, and disguised herself as a male to go to the school. From time to time she shops as a female, but in her dorm shes a male.
She wanted to make sure that she wouldnt make any new friends or they would end up finding out that she was really a female. But she ends up falling in love with her roomate! She just HAD to ask him out. Well, he said yes and they lived happily ever after ^^..... Nah Im kidding, k back to the story-- well she asked him out and when she got home... SHE WAS HER MALE SELF! Which means HE was gay XD. Yes she has a hard time telling him that shes a female and doesnt... He finds out and--- well you will see what happends then once I make my actual manga ^^
And she has trouble keeping her identity, and some stuff with a perverted doctor... and a blackmailer.... And old crush.... and WAYY more ^_^